Thank you for you / your / you're feedback regarding the track. I think I see what needs do / doing / done. The introduction sequence is energetic, and the track needs to reflect that. I am going to shorten the ambient beginning and get straight / strait / strate to the beat after 8 seconds, instead of 12. The hi-hats need a big reduce / reducing / reduction in high-end frequencies as they can grate the ear after repeated listens. Finally, the fade-out is ineffective. He / I / Our suggest a synchronised crash over the last few frames. That should create greater impact.